Voila!
I'm done :3
Not too shabby, if I may say so myself. Though, of course, not as cool as NeoLucky's work or anything of the sort XP
But still pretty snazzy considering I haven't really drawn much....ever....in the last few years
In any case, enjoy.
And no, I didn't make the background--though I wish I did ><
I found it randomly I think on Photobucket....?
Meh.
If it's yours, lemme know so I can give you credit :]
Criticism/Critiques are definitely welcome! Actually, they're wanted more than compliments--though those are nice too ^^
Drawn/Colored: Me
Soundtrack for the hours:
"Gamemaster"--Paul Oakenfold
"Desire (T-Wave Remix)"-- Blank And Jones
"Host of Seraphim (Remix)"--Dead Can Dance
Okay here are some crits. Don't worry I'll be gentle. ^^
Okay, with her head turned as it is, her body needs to follow along a little more. For instance, her breasts need to be more to the left, same with the hips. And with the hips themselves, I would bright them up a little higher on the waist. And make them a little fuller. Try looking for a photo reference of a woman in the same or similar pose as you have here, that will help you a great deal in getting things right and all matched up.
Oh and with the lighting, you should make any highlights on her body and hair match up to the colors in your background, such as a slightly lighter shade of green or blue. I love that BG BTW. ^^
I hope that helps. ^_^
That most definitely did help :]
I appreciate your critique/criticism ^^
It feels good to know someone who knows what they're talking about and what they do, haha.
And in the future, I'll try that.
I didn't even think to look at someone as a reference either. *slaps wrist*
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Oh geez. Let's have like a tutor session then :]
I need to practice my drawing anywhoz, so yeah.
We'll include Lindsey too.
I'm not much of a very good teacher though >_>
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Okay, with her head turned as it is, her body needs to follow along a little more. For instance, her breasts need to be more to the left, same with the hips. And with the hips themselves, I would bright them up a little higher on the waist. And make them a little fuller. Try looking for a photo reference of a woman in the same or similar pose as you have here, that will help you a great deal in getting things right and all matched up.
Oh and with the lighting, you should make any highlights on her body and hair match up to the colors in your background, such as a slightly lighter shade of green or blue. I love that BG BTW. ^^
I hope that helps. ^_^
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I won't critique...lol
I'm jealous X/ I wish I could draw -_-
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Ippen, shinde miru?
I appreciate your critique/criticism ^^
It feels good to know someone who knows what they're talking about and what they do, haha.
And in the future, I'll try that.
I didn't even think to look at someone as a reference either. *slaps wrist*
Thanks again! ^^
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Thanks to [link] for the avi ^^
"I would rather live my life as if there is a God, and die to find out there isn't, than live my life as if there isn't, and die to find out there is."
Don't worry ^^
And thanks!
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Thanks to [link] for the avi ^^
"I would rather live my life as if there is a God, and die to find out there isn't, than live my life as if there isn't, and die to find out there is."
You're welcome! ^^
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Ippen, shinde miru?
I need to practice my drawing anywhoz, so yeah.
We'll include Lindsey too.
I'm not much of a very good teacher though >_>
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Thanks to [link] for the avi ^^
"I would rather live my life as if there is a God, and die to find out there isn't, than live my life as if there isn't, and die to find out there is."
I think you'd do just fine! ^^
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Ippen, shinde miru?
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Thanks to [link] for the avi ^^
"I would rather live my life as if there is a God, and die to find out there isn't, than live my life as if there isn't, and die to find out there is."
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~Angela
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